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Icy by WerewolfUlrich Icy by WerewolfUlrich
Chase being fat. Eating strawberry ice cream.

Drawn with my mouse.
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Critique by OMG-a-dog-namedLawl Dec 4, 2012, 9:38:53 PM
I absolutely love this piece.. But there is some things I would like to address.

The hand, it is waaay to large, so is the arm. If you size it down, you'll be fine.

Is he wearing a jacket? Because the grey/black lines are out of place a tad.

His tongue, it's too thin to be an actual tongue. Just chunk it up a bit to make it more 'realistic' if you will.

The blueish tone under his eye should be more blackish, if you want the real affect.

Gosh, is he a vampire? If not, add some skin color! It seems either he is sick or a vampire >3> So add some more tan and you'll be perfect!

Thanks for reading~
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